關於 the other side travel guide ，我們在網路上蒐集到這些相關的討論、資訊與評價

CẮP SÁCH GIẢI NGỐ IELTS FT. SIÊU SAO Hoang Minh Thong

Ụa mọi người ơi, bữa h mọi người dằn vặt mị chuyện gì có nhớ kooooo? Ngoài sự vụ ông-chủ-nhà (tạm thông báo, đã thu câu hỏi, giờ chỉ còn chờ ông chủ nhà travel về thôi), mị còn bị dằn vặt các thể loại câu hỏi hàn lâm như thi ai-eo. Mà hỡi ôi, đời mị có thi ai-eo bao h. Có chăng sau này phải vượt biên qua nhà người anh em thiện lành cà-ná-đà thì may ra phải thi. Nhưng hiện giờ chắc chưa đâu, nên có biết gì mà đua chen với thiên hạ đầy rẫy cao nhân ai-eo 8, 9 chấm đồ.

NHƯNG! Đã có anh hùng phi tới giải cứu mị rồi các bạn ạ!!! Mị đã nhá hàng từ khi còn 25k subs đó haha, rằng một ngày đẹp trời mị sẽ lôi bạn Thông lẫy lừng ra phỏng vấn, "Toán 05-08 Phổ Thông Năng Khiếu, [...] siêu xịn với 8.5 overall (R9, L9, S8, W8.5), giảng viên trường ĐH Khoa Học Xã Hội - Nhân Văn, là thủ khoa khoa Quan Hệ Quốc Tế trước đó sau khi đã dằn túi giải 3 HSG Quốc Gia môn Văn năm 12. Dù từng đạt HCB giải Toán quốc tế tại Singapore năm lớp 10!"

And again, mị ko có cổ phần gì trong EdSpace shinh đẹp đúng chất learning space của bạn Thông đâu. Mị chỉ là cô gái PR dạo cho những người, những thứ mị thấy chất chơi. (Cũng có nhiều emails tới mời mị hợp tác PR sản phẩm, sponsor các kiểu mà mị ko có rảnh làm chuyện mị ko biết, cũng ko có thời gian tìm hiểu chuyện người ta, nên bye).

Nói chung, đây là là một post thu thập câu hỏi cho chuyên gia ai-eo trả lời, còn mị ngồi nghe phụ họa mua vui thôi hihi. Các bạn có thắc mắc gì về ai-eo thì cứ comment xuống, mị sẽ đọc và lọc rồi phỏng vấn bạn Thông nha. Mong đó sẽ là clip sâu sát ai-eo, giải đáp hết vấn vương, để các bạn chỉ cần tập trung vào học đúng hướng thôi ha (dù học sai thì vẫn thấm đc ít nha, còn hơn ko học).

Dài dòng quạ. Vậy nha!

#EdSpacelearningnotes #Writingseries #IELTS #IELTSwriting

NÂNG CẤP TỪ WRITING B2 (6.5 IELTS) LÊN C2 (8.5+ IELTS)

Hôm nay chúng mình sẽ chia sẻ một xíu về writing để "đổi món" nhen. Đây là một bài viết của một bạn học viên ở EdSpace (trình độ Keystones 2), và được hướng dẫn để chỉnh sửa, hoàn thiện.

Đề bài lấy từ sách The Cambridge Official Guide to IELTS, Practice Test 05 với nội dung sau:

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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Đây là bài viết gốc của bạn học viên:

In the modern world, it is an ugly truth that we are being watched by advance technology. Although some people have concern towards the drawback of monitoring system, I personally support its positive side and agree with those who think such technologies are far more benefits.

Those who oppose the surveillance technologies may argue that such systems infringe personal freedom. Since our every moment is being tracked, we may feel uneasy and even insecure sometimes. For instance, when we go shopping, there are multiple cameras installed by the owners are recording our every movement. Additionally, we may feel uncomfortable as we do not know what will they do with those recording. As a result, some people do not prefer to enjoy their leisure time at public places as they used to do in the past.

However, I believe the monitoring innovation, like other technology, also brings endless benefits to our daily life. One of the most significant benefits is that it helps strengthens our security system. For example, unlike a few decades ago we are now able to use the CCTV footage to catch criminals and support the crime investigation. Thus this not only allows us to speed up the investigation process but also makes the trial more efficiently. Furthermore, we can get immediate medical aid if someone is in trouble. In the past year, thanks to the efficient surveillance system setup on the expressway, control center in Ho Chi Minh provided timely support for a number of accidents and save many lives.

In conclusion, despite the arguments against the digital monitoring system, I strongly believe that its advantages outweighs the disadvantages as it makes our day-to-day more secure and boost our security system.

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Có thể thấy, bạn học viên đã trả lời khá tốt câu hỏi với các luận điểm liên quan. Mỗi luận điểm đã có sử dụng luận cứ và luận chứng. Từ vựng và cấu trúc câu linh hoạt và đa dạng. Tuy vậy, bài viết vẫn có nhiều điểm có thể cải thiện:
- Sắp xếp lại ý tưởng để có mạch logic tuyến tính (linearity - đặc trưng của tiếng Anh - EdSpace sẽ chia sẻ trong notes sau về tư duy ngôn ngữ trong tiếng Anh).
- Tách đoạn để đảm bảo thao tác phát triển lập luận học thuật: Argument development, với mỗi đoạn tập trung vào một central idea.
- Cải thiện từ dùng cho tự nhiên với văn phong học thuật tiếng Anh. Một số từ đang được sử dụng theo logic "dịch Việt - Anh" nên sẽ khó hiểu với ngườ bản xứ.
- Chỉnh sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (bài viết gặp khá nhiều vấn đề ngữ pháp phổ biến của học viên người Việt).

Trong hình là bài viết được EdSpace và bạn cùng chỉnh sửa, phát triển dựa trên cấu tứ & lập luận của chính bạn học viên.

Bài viết đầu tiên được Cambridge Write & Improve (*) chấm điểm B2, và bài viết revised được chấm điểm C2+ (tương đương trình độ proficiency & native).

Các bạn có muốn đọc nhiều bài theo thể loại này không hen? Comment cho EdSpace biết với nhé. Nếu có nhiều bạn thích đọc thì EdSpace sẽ chăm chỉ và có động lực viết & chia sẻ thể loại này hơn với các bạn ^^

Ghi chú:
(*)Cambridge Write & Improve: là một hệ thống Online System của Cambridge English giúp bạn luyện tập writing - EdSpace cũng sẽ có một bài chia sẻ về công cụ tuyệt vời này sớm đến các bạn.

菲斯、梅克尼斯：在古城裡玩「馬力歐」和「威利在哪裡」
Fes & Meknes: playing Mario and Where's Wally in old cities
(This post is in both Mandarin and English)

菲斯是撒哈拉三日遊的終點站，我們到達的時間大約是下午六點，正值車水馬龍、交通混亂之際。在老城入口下了車，和兩個團裡認識的日本朋友開始尋找藏在古城深處小巷內的旅店。老城（Medina）是摩洛哥旅遊的最大特色之一，錯綜複雜、左彎右拐如迷宮般的街道，每轉一個彎都可能有個新的驚喜，在裡面迷路是旅遊指南推薦的樂趣之一。

我們三人剛走進古城的時候還有說有笑，但不到五分鐘之後就一點也笑不出來了——一整天的車程令人疲憊，還得帶著幾個大的硬殼行李箱在石板路面上上下下，三個人簡直成了電腦遊戲裡的馬力歐；谷歌地圖顯示直線距離600公尺，我們卻得在迷宮般的城裡移動超過1公里；天色越來越黑，城裡到處都是不懷好意的當地青少年，不斷的跟我們說「這條路是錯的！」、「那裡什麼都沒有！」，但我非常清楚他們的目的——故意讓我們覺得自己迷路，以便藉帶路為由向我們伸手要錢。印象最深刻的是，即使到了地圖的顯示目的地前20公尺，身邊的小屁孩仍然在試圖錯亂我們；由於谷歌地圖在這裡也不準確，我對於是否走對路也沒有十分把握。

直到20公尺後，我們鑽入一條僅容一人的小巷裡，在一個斑駁的木門旁看到了不起眼的旅店標示，當下三人感覺有如絕處逢生，終於得救了！那一刻我也理解到，在摩洛哥的老城裡，寧可跟著不準確的谷歌地圖走錯路再繞回來，也不要相信任何一個小屁孩的話！

We ended the 3-day Sahara tour in Fes, another popular tourist destination. It was around 6pm, and our goal was to find our hotels in the maze-like old city, or "medina". Medina refers to the oldest part of a city encircled by walls. It's usually full of narrow, crooked streets and very hard to navigate. "Getting lost in medinas" has been promoted by travel websites as one of the top funs in Morocco.

I entered the old city with two friends I met in the tour group. We took it easy in the beginning, but soon realized it's not as simple as we thought. While Google Maps said the direct distance is 600 meters, we had to navigate through more than 1-km of poorly mapped streets in the medina. It was getting dark, and we had to carry luggages up and down as the streets ascended and descended. It was just like playing the Mario game. What's even worse is, deep in the medina, many local teenagers tried to bewilder us. All the way we heard shouts like "it's closed!" "Nothing is there!" "Wrong way!" I knew what was on their minds -- they wanted to make us feel lost and then pay them money for showing us the right way. Particularly, when we were just 20 meters from the destination shown on the map, the kids were still interfering us. To be honest, at that moment I wasn't 100% sure either, as Google Maps are not very accurate in medinas.

The anxiety continued until we turned into a <1 meter wide side alley and found the hotel name by an aged and rugged wooden door. It was a triumph for us! And we also learned an important lesson: it's better to follow your maps and get lost, than to trust in any kid in the medina. All they want is your money.

我對菲斯的第一印象應該是來自小學時候讀的某份兒童刊物，上面介紹了一個如魔幻世界的地方，一座古城裡有數十個比人還大的大染缸，裡面裝著各種不同顏色的染料，無數工人們穿梭其間，把處理好的皮革拿進來染色、染好的再送去加工，整個壯觀的畫面非常有《威利在哪裡》的感覺。在菲斯的第二天，我竟然有幸成為威利本人，親自走入小時候讀到的畫面之中。

皮革廠附近的許多住家都把屋頂改成觀景台兼賣店，每天讓數以千計的遊客進來眺望皮革廠順便貢獻當地經濟。我因為不想被強索高額費用，刻意先向路邊雜貨店的阿伯打聽行情，意外得知其實是可以走到染缸旁邊近距離觀看的（或者你想要整個人跳進去染應該也不會有人去阻止啦），我馬上決定不能放過這個大好的機會，於是就成為現場唯一一個不懼皮革臭味直接走到染缸旁邊的遊客（強烈懷疑在觀景台上拍照的遊客都想著：你這死觀光客，快還給我乾淨的畫面啊XD）。

走在大染缸旁邊是什麼感覺？氣味不像我想像的那麼難以忍受，但那種長時間直接暴露在各種染料、染劑、鳥糞（除毛用），比台灣的傳統魚市場更加紊亂的惡劣工作環境讓人印象深刻，那是站在觀景台上很難體會到的。

My first impression on Fes came from a children magazine, where I saw a photo in which numerous leather workers were over dozens of connected dying tanks. The tanks were full of different colors, and the workers were busy bringing in leathers to dye and taking out semi products. The scene made me think of the children book series Where's Wally. I'd never imagine that one day I'd become Wally and walk into the photo myself!

Residents around the tannery have converted their roofs into overlooks and gift shops, where thousands of visitors would take pictures from. To avoid unnecessary expenses, I made friend with a nearby vendor and asked him the best way to get in. He told me that if I won't mind the smell, I can actually go into the tannery and walk by the tanks, and so I did. I was the only tourist there who did that (which means I may have intrude some other visitors' photos, haha).

How was it like to look at the tanks and the workers closely? The smell doesn't bother me much. Exposure to all the materials, liquids and even pigeon poop (used to remove hairs from animal skin), however, made me realize how deleterious the work environment could be. That's something I'd never experienced by watching from the overlooks.

同日下午離開菲斯，搭摩洛哥國鐵（ONCF）前往下一個城市梅克尼斯。在火車站意外結識了一位當地大學生，他是摩洛哥境內第一位找我主動攀談而且不是為了要錢的在地人，英文相當流利。由於他家就住在梅克尼斯，熟門熟路的他就成了我的地陪，甚至收留了因為預定的旅店客滿而必須另覓地方過夜的我。他的出現，成功扭轉了我之前幾天「摩洛哥人就只想騙錢」的刻板印象。

旅行有時候很有趣，你對一個地方的印象，有時會因為一件不順心的事情而不堪回首，有時又會因為遇到一個好人而回味再三。這位摩洛哥大學生的出現真的是為他的國家神救援啊XD

As I left Fes and headed toward the next city Meknes, I met a local college student at the station. He is the first Moroccan who talked to me not for money. Since he is from Meknes, he became my local guide there. Not only that, he was hospitable enough to provide me accommodation when I realized my hotel reservation that night was cancelled without notice. His hospitality successfully overwrote the negative impression I got about Morocco, and made me Iike this country a lot more.

Here's something I realized after many travels: even one negative experience can make you hate a place a lot and never want to go back, while a good experience (often some nice people you meet on the way) can make you remember a place for a long time.

#ชีวิตในจีน ทำไมคนจีนถึงชอบมาเที่ยวเมืองไทย โดยเฉพาะเที่ยวทะเล? จีนก็มีทะเล มีเกาะ แต่ทำไมหลายคนถึงเลือกมาทะเลไทย?

อ้ายจงมีโอกาสได้คุยกับเพื่อนคนจีน ถึงประเด็นข้างต้น ทำให้รู้ว่า คนจีนมาเที่ยวเมืองไทย โดยเฉพาะทะเลไทย ด้วยสาเหตุหลักๆ 2 ประเด็น คือ

1. เที่ยวไทย ราคาไม่แพงมาก ทะเลสวย มีกิจกรรมให้ทำเยอะ (เมื่อสุดสัปดาห์ที่ผ่านมา อ้ายจงไปเกาะสีชัง คนจีนเยอะมากกกก ทั้งจีนแผ่นดินใหญ่และไต้หวัน ฮ่องกง โดยได้มีโอกาสถามคนจีน พบว่า ราคาสิ่งต่างๆบนเกาะถือว่าโอเค มองว่าไม่แพง)

2. ทะเลจีน อย่างเช่น เกาะไหหลำ (มณฑลไห่หนาน) ที่มีชื่อเสียงมาก ค่าใช้จ่ายแพงมาก คนก็เยอะจนแน่น โดยเฉพาะช่วงเทศกาล อย่างช่วงนี้ เทศกาลตรุษจีน แน่นจนเต็มหาด เต็มเกาะ ลองดูหลักฐานในรูป และทุกเทศกาล ค่าเดินทางอย่างตั๋วเครื่องบินจะแพงมาก แพงกว่าไปต่างประเทศอีก หากบินในช่วงตรุษจีนบวกลบหนึ่งอาทิตย์ ค่าตั๋วพุ่งสูงกว่าปกติ 10 เท่า เช่น เดินทางจาก เมืองชายทะเล "ซานย่า" ไปยัง "ปักกิ่ง" ต้องจ่ายมากกว่า 10,000 หยวน หรือประมาณ 50,000 บาท

ล่าสุดตั้งแต่เมื่อคืนจนถึงเช้าวันนี้ รถกว่าหมื่นคัน ติดแหง็กบริเวณท่าเรือต่างๆของเมืองไห่โข่ว เพราะทัศนวิสัยไม่ดี หมอกลง เรือออกจากเกาะไม่ได้ ผู้คนจำนวนมหาศาลจึงติดอยู่ที่นั่น หลายคนต้องกางเต้นท์นอนข้างทาง แต่ตรงนี้ก็ต้องขอชื่นชมทางการจีน ที่พอเกิดปัญหา เขาส่งเจ้าหน้าที่ทุกภาคส่วนมาดูแลทันที ดูแลทั้งคืน ไม่ว่าจะอำนวยความสะดวกข้าวปลาอาหาร เครื่องดื่ม ความปลอดภัย และส่งทีมแพทย์พยาบาลมาประจำตามจุด เผื่อมีคนป่วย

หลายคนอาจจะสงสัยว่า คนจีนรู้ว่าคนไปเที่ยวทะเลของจีนกันเยอะมาก โดยเฉพาะช่วงตรุษจีนนี้ ทำไมถึงยังแห่กันไปล่ะ? ตอบง่ายๆเลยคือ ช่วงนี้แทบทุกที่ของจีนยังคงหนาวเย็น แต่อากาศในเมืองทางใต้ ทางชายทะเลของจีน อากาศดีมาก ทุกคนเลยอยากไปพักผ่อน และหลายคนหลายครอบครัวก็อาจไม่ได้สะดวกออกนอกประเทศ ก็เลยพากันไปที่นั่น อีกอย่างคือ ก็คนอยากไป ยังไงก็ไป คนจำนวนไม่น้อยมองว่า ไปสัมผัสคลื่นมนุษย์ช่วงเทศกาลสักครั้งหนึ่งในชีวิต ถือเป็นสีสันและเสน่ห์อีกด้วย

ทั้งนี้ ในฐานะที่เราเป็นคนไทย ก็น่าดีใจที่ประเทศไทยเป็นจุดหมายปลายทางอันดับ1ของคนจีนมาโดยตลอด ในระยะเวลาสามสี่ปีมานี้ ดังนั้นก็ขอฝากให้ช่วยกันเป็นเจ้าบ้านที่ดี หากเจออะไรที่นักท่องเที่ยวจีนรวมถึงชาติอื่นทำไม่ถูกต้อง ก็ช่วยกันชี้แนะ หรือจะส่งมาที่อ้ายจง ให้ช่วยนำเสนอสิ่งที้ถูกต้องในสังคมออนไลน์จีนก็ได้ครับ อ้ายจงยินดีเต็มที่ ^^

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#อ้ายจง #เล่าเรื่องเมืองจีน
#Life in China. Why do Chinese people like to visit Thailand especially to travel to the sea? There is a sea in China. But why do many people choose to come to Thailand?

I have a chance to talk to Chinese friends to the above point. It makes me know that Chinese people visit Thailand, especially Thailand with 2 main reasons.

1. Travel to Thailand. Very affordable. Beautiful sea. There are plenty of activities to do. (last weekend, I went to Sichang Island. There are many Chinese people. Both Mainland and Taiwan, Hong Kong. We have a chance to ask Chinese people found that It's okay. I think it's not expensive)

2. Chinese sea such as Koh Haian (Haian province) that is very expensive. There are plenty of people. Especially during the festival like this time. The Chinese new year is full of the beach. Check out the evidence in the photos and every festival. Flight tickets will be more expensive than going abroad. If you fly during Chinese new year, 10 times higher than usual, such as traveling from the seashore " to " to " Beijing " must pay more than 10,000 yuan? Around 50,000 baht

Recently, from last night until this morning, over ten thousand cars are stuck in the pier of Haikhong city. Because the cuddle th of the cuddle th of the fog can't get out of the island. So many people are stuck there. Many people need to spread. Tent is sleeping on the side of the road, but here, I would like to salute the Chinese official who sent all sectors to take care of them immediately. Take care of them all night. Whether it's food, food, drink, safety and send medical team at the

Many people may wonder if Chinese people know that there are many people going to the Chinese sea, especially during this Chinese new year. Why are they still going to go? It's easy to answer. It's almost everywhere in China. But the weather in the south of China. The weather is very good. Everyone wants to relax and many families may not be out of the country. So I took cuddle am there. Besides, it's a person. No matter how you want to go. There are not many people. I think that they experience human waves during a lifetime. It is also colorful and charm.

As we are Thai people, I am glad that Thailand has been the number 1 destination for the past three and four years. So I would like to be a good host. If you find something that Chinese, including other nations have done wrong. Please guide or send it to me. Please present the right thing in Chinese online society. Be happy to the fullest ^^

Thank you for the photos from the pages in Weibo. Credit as shown in the photo.

#อ้ายจง #เล่าเรื่องเมืองจีนTranslated

This time we visited one of the most mysterious islands you'll ever find in Japan. It is located in the central region of Japan, taking almost 3 hours from Osaka through countless mountains. But once you arrive, there awaits a breathtaking view that you'll never forget.

Thank you Thule for believing in my vision and making this project come to life.
To learn more about Thule and their amazing products, check out the link below!
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If you want to learn more about my travels, check out my other socials!
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【Other Videos】
Rediscover Japan - A different side of Japan
https://youtu.be/8q4JoAivW-I

Against the Waves - A story behind Kaiki Yamanaka (A Surfer's Documentary)
https://youtu.be/066L83m4bi8

Follow What You Love
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【About Myself】
I guess I'm a filmmaker, adventure photographer, storyteller, and content creator...
I'm based in Tokyo, doing freelance video work for both Japanese and international clients.
My interest for video grew when I first went backpacking on my own. In the beginning it was just for fun, but I slowly found myself loving to express through visuals.


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In this video I'll be sharing you my favorite spots to shoot around the Tokyo Skytree.
Especially during this time of the year, the sakura (cherry blossoms) will start to bloom around the Skytree. It's one of the best times of the year to shoot and I hope this gives you a better insight on Tokyo's photography spots.

【Spots】
0:00 Opening
1:26 Tobu Bridge
3:55 Kitajukken River
4:21 Jukkenbashi-dori Bridge

Thank you for watching! If you want to learn more about my travels, check out my other socials!
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Other Videos:
Rediscover Japan - A different side of Japan
https://youtu.be/8q4JoAivW-I

Against the Waves - A story behind Kaiki Yamanaka (A Surfer's Documentary)
https://youtu.be/066L83m4bi8

Slow Down, you're in the Philippines - cinematic video
https://youtu.be/HiMDBRoedis

To Let Go Sometimes - Hong Kong (cinematic travel video)
https://youtu.be/CNS1WYAsgDU

Playlist:
My Films - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ1-bB6mB3FG7zcNowGQRYfN0xuSkyTXL
Cinematic Vlogs - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ1-bB6mB3FGEZoro_0WbJ7_LTQENegZC
Premier Pro & After Effects Tutorials - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ1-bB6mB3FEe1ggJVpKM1vbRAAlZJb8d
Camera Gears - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZ1-bB6mB3FFMus10Bkl5j2gfkEQK4yDR

About Myself:
I guess I'm a filmmaker, adventure photographer, storyteller, and content creator...
I'm based in Tokyo, doing freelance video work for both Japanese and international clients.
My interest for video grew when I first went backpacking on my own. In the beginning it was just for fun, but I slowly found myself loving to express through visuals.


#Japan #Tokyo #travel #cinematic #guide #photography

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Sharp Island is one of the islands in Port Shelter, Sai Kung, with the famous tombolo - a sandbank that appears during low tide linking to a smaller island - on one side and Half Moon Bay beach on the other.

There is a 2km hike between them and you can hike between the two in under an hour - but this time, we decided to do it round trip!

For more Sai Kung hiking:
https://www.laughtraveleat.com/hong-kong/sai-kung-nature-guide/

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