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【Sonny說你聽：不多不少的浪漫
#情人節 限時活動！留言幫你改英文寫作】

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在中文寫作的世界裡
也許寫多一點比較有誠意
但在英文寫作的世界裡
字多不是美德、字少又達意才是強者

我們對英文寫作的不熟悉和不自信
總是會不知不覺寫了許多冗字

This is such a long and busy day!
其實就是 It’s a long day!

Could you please tell me when you are available? (9個字)
可以寫成
Please kindly advise your availability. (5個字)

Jane was not aware of the fact that she made many of her colleagues unhappy. (15 個字)
可以改成 Jane didn’t notice that she irritated many of her colleagues. (10個字)

寫作專家 Hairston & Keene 說
“Good writing is economical.”
：「好的寫作要省字」

《英文寫作聖經》更強調
：「好的寫作是字字有真意」

#揪出冗詞、 #精煉文字
真的是讓英文寫作
變漂亮的必練基本功！

我在 Hahow 好學校的
《英文寫作經典指南》已經開課囉！
教你刪除冗字的獨門訣竅
➡️ https://hahow.in/cr/sonny-eng-writing1

2020/5/6 前看完課程
再抽《英文寫作聖經》簽名版！
➡️ https://tinyurl.com/wxwvhlp

跟著我的腳步
一步一步朝好文筆邁進吧！

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Sonny老師的翻譯&教學札記

【玳瑚師父公告】《靠近我就在今晚#40: 聚財八法餐會 - 第四卷》
40th Learning Session: The 8 Methodologies To Amass Wealth (Part 4)

妳你天天，甚至每時每刻，都在做的發財夢，其實也一樣，能實現於妳你每天的日常生活中。

編織夢，不如實現夢。

這才是名符其實的現實人。

*************

日期及時間： 830pm-1030pm，星期四， 31 August 2017
地點：Melt Cafe, Mandarin Oriental, Marina Square

*************

想🉐️吾補助者，請聯絡吾之助理，可發短訊至： +65 90212098，以便留位。這將是小型的活動。爲了表達個人誠意，玳瑚師父一概不接受透過別人代傳的簡訊報名。

簡訊中請附上：
1）個人中文姓名，
2）個人八字，

以便玳瑚師父能夠依照您的八字所需而指點您。

妳你的困擾，玳瑚師父絕對有能力幫妳你解除，但改命有改命的規矩。若想得到師父的幫助，出席活動，請先閱讀他在臉書所有的文章，並按讚，讓師父知道妳你願意增長自己的智慧，與人為善。一天內自然無法讀完，但可先報名，再發心和努力地閱讀按讚。

近月來，有兩名報名未被接受者，擅自出席餐會，以爲混水摸魚，就能會見玳瑚師父。餐師父一向注重個人禮貌，對於一切不速之客，一概都下逐客令，不會給予任何對話機會。

在此，提醒各位，師父廣開方便門，爲眾生排憂解難，切勿前來任性打擾，爲其他出席者帶來麻煩。無論男女老少，必會嚴厲譴責。

餐飲自費，除此以外，沒有額外收費。請趁早報名。一律歡迎有福有慧有心者！請記得攜帶紙和筆，及誠懇禮貌的學習態度。

感謝大家的擁戴與支持！

⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯

You dream of being wealthy every single day, even every moment, without realising that you can make it happen in your daily lives.

Building sandcastle in the air?

I say you would be better off if you start working on your dream now. This is what I call a true realist.

Let me show you the way.

*************

Date & time: 830pm-1030pm, Thursday, 31 August 2017
Venue: Melt Cafe, Mandarin Oriental, Marina Square

*************

To reserve a slot at the Dinner Session, kindly send a text message personally to my assistant at +65 90212098.

Requests sent on behalf of other people will not be accepted.

Information required:
1) Your Chinese name,
2) Your birth detail,

so that Master Dai Hu can advise you, based on your elemental needs.

Master Dai Hu is definitely able to solve your woes. However, there are universal laws about changing one's fate for the better. One must first be willing to accept virtuous knowledge, and share them with others.

In the past one month, two persons turned up at Master Dai Hu's meal sessions, despite their registrations being rejected. They assumed they could meet Master. Please know that Master Dai Hu is particular about a person's etiquette. Any gatecrasher will be ordered to leave, and not given any chance to speak to Master Dai Hu.

Here's a reminder to everybody. Master Dai Hu had made it more convenient for the masses to seek help from him, at no charge. Please do not be capricious and disrupt Master's ongoing Learning Session, creating trouble for other participants.

Any one that does so will be severely dealt with, regardless of their gender and age.

If you wish to obtain help from Master Dai Hu, and attend his events, please read all his articles on his FB page, and hit the LIKE button. This is to let him know that you wish to take the first step in transforming your life. Of course, it would be a tall order to LIKE all his articles in one day, but you can register for his event first then continue to read and LIKE his articles diligently.

I welcome people who are eager to learn and willing to put in the effort to turn life around for themselves and their loved ones. This will be a small-scale event. Do register early to avoid disappointment!

【玳瑚師父公告】《靠近我就在今晚#39: 聚財八法餐會 - 第三卷》
39th Learning Session: The 8 Methodologies To Amass Wealth (Part 3)

妳你天天，甚至每時每刻，都在做的發財夢，其實也一樣，能實現於妳你每天的日常生活中。

編織夢，不如實現夢。

這才是名符其實的現實人。

*************

日期及時間： 830pm-1030pm，星期二， 29 August 2017
地點：Melt Cafe, Mandarin Oriental, Marina Square

*************

想🉐️吾補助者，請聯絡吾之助理，可發短訊至： +65 90212098，以便留位。這將是小型的活動。爲了表達個人誠意，玳瑚師父一概不接受透過別人代傳的簡訊報名。

簡訊中請附上：
1）個人中文姓名，
2）個人八字，

以便玳瑚師父能夠依照您的八字所需而指點您。

妳你的困擾，玳瑚師父絕對有能力幫妳你解除，但改命有改命的規矩。若想得到師父的幫助，出席活動，請先閱讀他在臉書所有的文章，並按讚，讓師父知道妳你願意增長自己的智慧，與人為善。一天內自然無法讀完，但可先報名，再發心和努力地閱讀按讚。

餐飲自費，除此以外，沒有額外收費。請趁早報名。一律歡迎有福有慧有心者！請記得攜帶紙和筆，及誠懇禮貌的學習態度。

感謝大家的擁戴與支持！

⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯

You dream of being wealthy every single day, even every moment, without realising that you can make it happen in your daily lives.

Building sandcastle in the air?

I say you would be better off if you start working on your dream now. This is what I call a true realist.

Let me show you the way.

*************

Date & time: 830pm-1030pm, Tuesday, 29 August 2017
Venue: Melt Cafe, Mandarin Oriental, Marina Square

*************

To reserve a slot at the Dinner Session, kindly send a text message personally to my assistant at +65 90212098.

Requests sent on behalf of other people will not be accepted.

Information required:
1) Your Chinese name,
2) Your birth detail,

so that Master Dai Hu can advise you, based on your elemental needs.

Master Dai Hu is definitely able to solve your woes. However, there are universal laws about changing one's fate for the better. One must first be willing to accept virtuous knowledge, and share them with others.

If you wish to obtain help from Master Dai Hu, and attend his events, please read all his articles on his FB page, and hit the LIKE button. This is to let him know that you wish to take the first step in transforming your life. Of course, it would be a tall order to LIKE all his articles in one day, but you can register for his event first then continue to read and LIKE his articles diligently.

I welcome people who are eager to learn and willing to put in the effort to turn life around for themselves and their loved ones. This will be a small-scale event. Do register early to avoid disappointment!